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PACKING BOXES – EDITED
12 March 2015
Home boxes, crime, Fiction, mystery, places, poeple, Short story, writing 2 Comments
So, I have made some changes to the story, not too many but hopefully have made it clearer now. Tell me what you think in the comments below!
Fiction / Non Fiction: Fiction
Form: Short Story
Genre: Adventure, crime, mystery
Word Count: 3,107 words
She sat on the edge of the low footstool, her chin resting warily on her hand. She looked around at the room. It was cluttered with brown packing boxes of various shapes and sizes. “This is the right thing, isn’t it? Of course it is, stop being silly.”
The lump at the back of her throat where the tears welled made it hard to swallow. She looked through the bay window. Her eyes were drawn to the weather beyond. Black clouds hung low in the sky, ominous, willing her to step outside in order to release their fury down upon her. The weather reflected her mood which was dark and brooding. She sighed, a long, low, gut-wrenching sigh that emanated from deep within her soul.
The door chimes rang, singing jingle bells, even though it was already spring. They wrenched her out of the dark mire. She knew it was not one of her friends. She hadn’t seen much of them lately. They had left her to deal with everything on her own, at the exact time when she needed them most. The door chime rang again. She had stopped in front of the large, gilded mirror that dominated the entrance hall. The woman she stared at was pale and frightened. Her raven hair turned white almost overnight. Had it really been overnight or had it been longer?
She opened the door and stared at the grubby, fat man, who grinned at her with his brown, broken teeth. He was sweating profusely, even though it was bitterly cold outside, with a breeze that could chill a skeleton. She shivered involuntarily, not because of the sudden cold draught that now swept like an unbridled horse through the house but because she knew who this man was. “Mr Smith?” she asked, through clenched teeth.
PACKING BOXES
10 March 2015
Fiction, Home, People, Places boxes, crime, Fiction, mystery, places, poeple, Short story 2 Comments
A short fiction I wrote some time ago. I think it was for a magazine submission? Thought I would post it here as I am currently going through old writings. Help me out with the genre in the comments, please. As you can see I couldn’t decide between adventure, crime and mystery. I am so rubbish at genres!
Fiction / Non Fiction: Fiction
Form: Short Story
Genre: Adventure, crime, mystery
Word Count: 2,988 words
She sat on the edge of the low footstool, her chin resting warily on her hand. She looked around at the room. It was cluttered with brown packing boxes of various shapes and sizes. “This is the right thing, isn’t it? Of course it is, stop being silly.”
The lump at the back of her throat where the tears welled made it hard to swallow. She looked through the bay window. Her eyes were drawn to the weather beyond. Black clouds hung low in the sky, ominous, willing her to step outside in order to release their fury down upon her. The weather reflected her mood which was dark and brooding. She sighed, a long, low, gut-wrenching sigh that emanated from deep within her soul.
The door chimes rang, singing jingle bells, even though it was already spring. They wrenched her out of the dark mire. She knew it was not one of her friends. She hadn’t seen much of them lately. They had left her to deal with everything on her own, at the exact time when she needed them most. The door chime rang again. She had stopped in front of the large, gilded mirror that dominated the entrance hall. The woman she stared at was pale and frightened. Her raven hair turned white almost overnight. Had it really been overnight or had it been longer?
Angelica
21 February 2014
Fiction, Fiction, History, Home, People Angelica, child, Colonel, Family, Fiction, historical fiction, Home, Short story, slice of life, ward 3 Comments
Fiction / Non Fiction: Fiction
Form: Short Story
Genre: Historical, Slice of life
Word Count: 906 words
The Colonel stood in the centre of his study, leaning heavily on his cane, and looking sternly at his new ward. “What did you say her name was?”
“Angelica, sir.” Came the gentle reply from behind him.
He looked over his shoulder at the nun and grunted. “Angelica? Well that is some name to live up to. Whoever though of that name for this child, I wonder?”
“She will surprise you, Sir. you will soon see that she is her name.”
“Well, We will see. She looks frail, hardly a child who could earn her keep. How old is she?”
“She is eleven, sir. ”
“Eleven! She is very malnourished then. I would have put her at eight at the most.”
“And might I add, sir, that she will certainly earn her keep.”
“Is that so?” he asked, in mock surprise, before turning back to the girl, “Did you hear that, child? Sister Christina seems to think you are capable of hard work. Is she correct in this assumption?”
Beyond Our Land
16 May 2013
Fiction, Places dystopian, earth, Fiction, future, our land, past, places, Pratchett, siblings, story, Terry Pratchett, utopian, writing 5 Comments
Form: Story – incomplete
Topic: Places
Genre: Dystopian/Utopian Fiction
Word Count: 1,578 words.
I wrote this for the Terry Pratchett First Novel Award Competition for 2012 but by the time I saw that Mr Pratchett was holding this competition, it was already September 2012 and the competition closed on 31 December 2012. It was hardly a good time of year to start writing a novel, which I would have to try to cram into three months. It was asking too much. This is what I managed of it. I thought I would post it here. Let me know what you think and if you think it’s worth pursuing.
Beyond Our Land
Rahjet took a deep breath and stepped out from the warmth, comfort and safety of his dwelling. The icy wind blasted his face and the solidified raindrops pounded the top of his hard hat. He squinted through the darkness, waiting, counting time ticking away. Out here, time slowed to a crawl. Every minute became ten minutes. Finally he saw the dim light flickering in the distance. It ebbed and flowed as it drew nearer to him. And then he heard the shouts of the men and the synchronised screams from the packs of wolf-dogs. At last the group was upon him. They pulled up with a flurry of snow and ice spraying out into the atmosphere. The front man jumped lightly from his cart and ran, in that padded puffin kind of way, which was the only way to walk with snow shoes, toward Rahjet. The man was completely covered in a thick full-body blanket, only his eyes peeked through tiny slits in the top but Rahjet knew immediately who this man was. “Brother,” he called as the man came to within hearing range.
The man raised his hand in greeting and, in a muffled voice replied, “Brother.”
The two men embraced, briefly. “How were your travels, Mahir?”
“Good, my brother. The wolf-dogs behaved themselves for a change.” And he laughed heartily.
Rahjet laughed with his brother. “You must all come inside for refreshments before we commence the return journey. The wolf-dogs can go into the sheds down the bottom. There is fresh water, heat and some meat for them.”